ROUGH CUT OF THRILLER OPENING 

What I think is good about our rough cut?

*the idea itself

*the costume

*the places we filmed

*the killing clip 

*the shot of smiling 

What I think is bad abut our rough cut? 

*the time we filmed at

*the amount of long takes on insignificant scenes.

*the constant pop ups of the tudors

*the swing scene

*the use of the same shots more then once I think is ineffective

What worries me about the rough cut?

*the idea we have only a few days 

*people who haven't read my blog and don't know about the background to the blog don;t really understand what is going on, they say they don't know why I was killed and it was the quickest shot and the rest are all pointless

*the idea that it will affect my final grade and their isn't much we can do to change it.