Rough Cut

Rough Cut

Here is the rough cut for our thriller opening. The rough cut had many faults, which needed to be edited when doing our final copy.

·       Some scenes were to fast

·       The transition from one scene to the next were not smooth

·       Confusion in the storyline (needs to be REARRANGED)

As indicated below some of the errors, which came across in our first rough, cut of editing. Having a rough cut enabled us to see the parts we needed to fix making sure that it made more sense next time. The most important point, which occurred, was that when people viewed this they were unsure of what was going on although this was a discreet title sequence people were still confused. When watching this back as a group we had agreed that the scenes we had were not in the right place which made it more confusing  when the viewers watched it back.

When making the final cut of our thriller we need to make sure that the sequence is clear and easy to understand. The rough cut was an outline we used to improve the final copy of our thriller opening, then allowing us to think in detail and focus on specific parts which needed to be improved.

Overall the rough cut was a great way in finding errors which needed to be improved. This was also a great way to preview our work and have feedback as a group in what we think will need to be improved when making the final draft.