The first issue is the length, is is three minutes and two seconds which is too long. We have some scenes which are continue on for too long. Such as the scene where the character is walking with the bat towards the vicim:
The second is the order of the scenes, watching it we realised that maybe the story of it is not clear and how the audience may not understand the characters or what is happening.
The third thing is that it does not exactly make sense why the shots of the park sign and the picture of Culpepper appear, they need to appear at the right time of the opening in order for it to make sense:
The last thing is that we need to decide which type of sequence we want our scene to be, whether whether it is discreet or traditional, or if we want credits over a blank screen. We have decided to that our scene should have a discreet opening.
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